Friday, August 19, 2011

Actresses ages 15-20 white blonde hair?

I've been following your stories for awhile now & you do a pretty good job describing things. You don't need a picture--you already gave the bare bones description. Just flesh it out. I like grey eyes because they're more unusual. Say something like "her eyes were like charcoal briquettes reduced to ashes." Instead of medium length hair make it shoulder or collar length. "Her hair was prematurely white instead of its once blondness." or "No two people could agree if her hair was white or gold depending on the light." or "Her golden white hair was the color of an expensive pendent." You've been doing fine. Don't let a stumbling block lead to laziness. You can see her in your mind's eye, now let us see w/ your words.

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